Such a great story, but so badly executed. Maybe not bad, exactly, but not very good. I can handle the many long and tedious info dumps, but the heroine's naïveté and self-inflicted victimization is not something I can respect, or read without a constant feeling of loathing. And especially from a first-person pov, it's unacceptable [to me].
I'm hoping the next installment brings out a better, stronger side of the heroine. (fingers crossed!)