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A lass with sass / Who's full of class / Yet has the brass / To pass gas / To kick your ass / To be crass

Grin and bear it?

Since when is a grin less powerful than a smile?  Kristen Ashley (author) has the habit of "downgrading" her character's smiles to grins, and it throws me off every time.

She also has a habit of using prepositions incorrectly.  Especially the word 'in'.  I.e. (these are not actual quotes):
      "He laid her down in the bed."
      "She crawled in the couch."